Aalam Deewanagi Ka

by: deleted (on: Mar 1, 2012)
Category: Poem   Language: Hindi
tags: Sneha Sharma
Chubte hain kaante mohabbat ke rasten mein
woh pukarte hain aur hum chale jaate hain
yaar se ke liye milne kabi ashqon se
to kabhi lahoo mein nahaye jaate hain
de sakte nahin do pal bhi woh humein
hum to din raat unke naam kiye jaate hain
aaj mar bhi jaaye to koi gum nahin
tere bin yun bhi to hum mare jaate hain
jaante nahin woh naam bhi humara
hum to mehfil mein unke naam se bulaye jaate hain
aaine mein khud ko dekhe ek umra ho gayi
haste hue chehre mein bhi udaas paye jaate hain
chot lagi hain is dil par unki khatir
ilzaam phir bhi hum khud par lagaye jaate hain
yaar se ke liye milne kabi ashqon se
to kabhi lahoo mein nahaye jaate hain
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Ratings: 80
 
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3074 days ago
Very nice !!!!
 
 
3074 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3074 days ago
yaar se ke liye milne kabi ashqon se
to kabhi lahoo mein nahaye jaate hain
 
 
3081 days ago
v excellent ,
 
 
3081 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3081 days ago
coollll
 
 
3081 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
Bahut Khub dear
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
superb.....
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
Nice!
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
haste hue chehre mein bhi udaas paye jaate hain
chot lagi hain is dil par unki khatir
ilzaam phir bhi hum khud par lagaye jaate hain
yaar se ke liye milne kabi ashqon se
to kabhi lahoo mein nahaye jaate hain
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
well tried..
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 8
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
very nice dear,i like it too much
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
 
3082 days ago
jaante nahin woh naam bhi humara
hum to mehfil mein unke naam se bulaye jaate hain
aaine mein khud ko dekhe ek umra ho gayi
haste hue chehre mein bhi udaas paye jaate hain
 
 
3082 days ago
Rating: 10
 
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