Remain kind

by: hasmukh amathalal (on: Apr 29, 2013)
Category: Poem   Language: English
tags: jadia4708au
Somewhere it is trust
Considered as must
Whether it is love or lust
Something should come as first

Man and woman
Both are human
Yet needs company
As blessed by almighty

I felt it as compulsion
When went on for relation
May be it was call of the age
But remained successful and managed

It is almost entire span
That has been on with no plan
I look back and enjoy
As it is matter of pride and joy

Why do we dig our past?
When it has successfully lasted
On the contrary one must look up
Say good bye to by gone and have tea in cup

I give fare chance
To everybody at once
As we tend to commit error
There should not remain past as horror

We must live to cherish
Keep eagerness to finish
With whatever we have in mind
And most important is to remain kind

Love may succeed
Only when you heed
To the internal awakening
That makes you shine in the evening
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Yes, that's quite a thought - remain kind! Thanks for sharing this meanigful poem, Mehtaji. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india Apr 29, 2013 ________________________________________

Say goodbye to bygone and have tea in cup-profound line.intresting verse sir.Warm regards to you. E.Vishnupriya, Bangalore Apr 29, 2013 _____________________________

Say goodbye to bygone and have tea in cup-profound line.intresting verse sir.Warm regards to you. E.Vishnupriya, Bangalore Apr 29, 2013 _____________________________

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perfect s p2 minutes ago absolutely lovely Comment +1 Forget the Past and Be Kind
 
 
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good work
 
 
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Ahaa, bravo Sir, thanks for sharing
 
 
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yaaa 1 should be kind to all women and have love 4 all...
 
 
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wonderful one sir...
 
 
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541 days ago
Love may succeed
Only when you heed
To the internal awakening ..........EXCELLENT ONE SIR
 
 
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